UC知道我写了一篇题目为"Christmas day"的英语60词的小作文，想请各位高手帮帮忙，看看我哪里写错了！！！——
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（挑的错好又多的我会再给加悬赏的）！！！
我的作文：Christmas is a very important Western festiral.At Christmas. People don't work.They get ready for Christmas. They buy Chritmas trees.They buy some Christmas cards and some gifts for their friends.They buy some colourful lights,too.They put up the Christmas trees.They get together and sing songs.Some children play with a Santa Claus.They feel very happy.
我的作文：Christmas is a very important Western festiral.At Christmas. People don't work.They get ready for Christmas. They buy Chritmas trees.They buy some Christmas cards and some gifts for their friends.They buy some colourful lights,too.They put up the Christmas trees.They get together and sing songs.Some children play with a Santa Claus.They feel very happy.
这个简单句太多。不怎么好改，似乎整个全得改
play with a Santa Claus好象不用a的吧
On December 25th every year, the entire Western world celebrates Christmas. This day marks the birth of Jesus Christ, who was the founder of Christianity.
这样的句子似乎好点，你不妨用用
1. festival拼错了
2.They put up the Christmas trees.They get together and sing songs.
什么意思啊?
我说的只是表面上的
其余的意见请其他高手说吧